Writing Task

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For my writing task today I was writing about my favourite place to be which is my bedroom. I wrote my introduction, my looks paragraph and my senses paragraph. The looks paragraph is about what the room looks like and the senses paragraph is what you feel, smell, see and hear. Here is my writing task. 

I enjoyed coming up with the descriptive words because it made the writing more interesting. I think I described the looks paragraph well. I could improve by writing what I saw and felt because I just wrote what I could hear and smell.

Have you ever done this before?