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Wednesday 6 May 2020

Reading task

IALT: Draw a scene from the text I am currently reading.
The text I am reading is Grandparents day. I had to draw a scene where there is a picnic in school for grandparents day. This is my drawing
What do you think I could improve on?

5 comments:

  1. Carol Whitlow7 May 2020 at 14:37

    Cool picture of Grandparents Day Peyton.I really like all the activities you have included.Perhaps some colour would definaely add to it and make it stand out.

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  2. I love your drawing Peyton. It must have taken you ages. There is a lot going on there. Have you managed to go to the beach or have a picnic with your family lately/ we went for a bike ride on the beach the other day then I went fishing and Robert caught a big stingray.

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  3. Hi Peyton, your drawing is amazing. I do not think you could improve on anything, because your drawing is great. Well done. What have you been doing during this time to keep you busy?

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  4. Hey Peyton. You've done an amazing job on your picture. I like how it is very creative! What's your favorite thing to do with your Grandparents?

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  5. Hi Peyton, I really like your creative drawing you've done a awesome job. I think you should put a little colour into it.
    Do yo spend every Grandparents day with your grandparents?
    NICE WORK PEYTON KEEP IT UP :)

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