For my reading task I had to first read the story 'Bok Choy'. When I had read the story I had to pretend as if I was Ah Sum (who is a character in 'Bok Choy') and write a letter to his family in Canton. In the letter I wrote how he was feeling about where he was living and what life had been like for him. This is my letter.
I most enjoyed choosing a font and the background. I tried choosing a font that looked liked writing. I made the background look like an old piece of parchment. I found it most hard to decide what I was going to write because you have to understand what is has been like for him. I think I could of made the date a bit bigger. What do you think I could improve on?
Hi Peyton. Great job and What are you writing on my blog? Haha. Great job can't wait to see more. The background was pretty cool
ReplyDeletegood job peyton i liked how you add a map for your letter maybe you can work on you tell things about it but after that you are good
ReplyDeleteHi Peyton. Good job with your letter. I really like this letter. I like that you put in a handwriting font and a paper background. Well done!
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